从萌生出国留学的想法直到最终入读申请院校,肯定要经历很多步骤,要提早预算好。
Dear xx,
At the request of University of Denver, my student in Zhengzhou 19th HighSchool, I’m providing this reference, which I hope can be useful for you toreview her application to your undergraduate program.
I have been the Chinese teacher and class director in Zhengzhou 19th HighSchool for more than ten years. We are one of the most famous and high-qualityhigh schools in the whole city, the faculties in our school are all renowned andhighly-experienced. Though I’m relatively young in the school, I have lots ofexperience in Chinese teaching and student managing. I have been titled theoutstanding young teacher and class-director by school and city.
Yadi Wang came to my class in September 20xx, the semester she entered ourschool. I know she is talent in music. She used to performance flute in ourschool activities, such as in talent show. In 20xx, she passed the high leveltest of FLUTE LEVEL 8. She loves music that is all her classmates and schoolteachers know.
YADI WANG had special leadership and friendship in my class. Once we wereabout to take part in our school’s drama festival. We were supposed to play aChinese traditional drama –BAI. I analyzed some key plots and roles of thisdrama to my students, and then left all the other works to their own. YADI WANGwas in charge of the directing and casting. It was not an easy job as it maysound. The enthusiasm made everybody ask for the leading roles, but no one waswilling to take these minor ones. So YADI WANG decided to run an the performance in the audition and students’ actual characteristics,YADI WANG assigned everyone the most suitable role. And then, she divided thecrew into several groups. Different groups rehearsed in different places at thesame time. And the leading actors were the strings to connect these groups intoa collectivity. Through this way, it saved lots of time, which was the scarcestthing to middle school students, to get everybody into his role. And before thefinal performance, she just needed to call all the actors together for a previewfor once or twice. She has done even better than I had expected.
Another time was in a seminar, we ran a debate competition about teacher’sprofessional ethics. YADI WANG was the leading debater of the con side. Duringthe debate, she showed her wide knowledge and eloquence. She used lots ofproverbs, history figures and examples to support her stand, and every word ofher was incisive to get to the point, and also full of humors. Her performancewon both her teammates and opponents’ admiration.
Her positivity and versatility also can be found in many other aspects. Sheis ours school’s famous piano player who is always invited to play in manyoccasions. She knows the traditional skill of calligraphy writing, which she hasbeen practicing from very small. During weekends or vacations, the “HolidayWorking Team” she leads can always be found doing many community , in order to get more students to participate in class’s management,the student cadre will change every semester or two, by student vote. But YadiWang has won all the elections by now, so she continued to be the monitor fromthe beginning of our class to today, and very likely to the graduation. All herclassmates have approbated her ability, characteristics and performance. She isalready a model in the class.
In this reference, I didn’t mention much about Yadi Wang’s grade, which Ibelieve you can easily find was so outstanding from her transcripts and herranking (25th out of 1560 students), because I’d like to give you something thatyou cannot find from these documents but I think is equally important tocontribute to her excellence. I do hope, according to my recommendation, youcould give her a favorable review. Thank you! Please feel free to contactme.
Yours sincerely,
xx
Dear Sir:
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University in June next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
尊敬的X大学老师领导:
您好!
首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审视我的申请材料!
我是X市高级中学理科实验班的X,和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样,我也但愿通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想考入X大学。
在众多高校中,唯有X大学深深吸引了我,而且我也听到X的学长说,X非常适合那些“有想法主意”的人,只要你有想法主意,X都会尽全力帮你实现,我觉得我就是那种有想法主意、有立异意识的人,这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到X读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力,我的成绩一直名列前茅,中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中,我并没有骄傲,而是更加努力的学习,成绩也有了进一步的奔腾,每次考试成绩均不乱在年级前十名,施展好时还会进入前五名,我坚信自己是有资格进入X大学的。
相信在此之前,您已经阅读过了无数的自荐信,对省、市三好学生,校学生会主席,团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜,这些刺眼的荣誉和职位我都没有,我有的是对X全面的了解,有的是对X始终如一的热爱与向往,有的是“非X不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是,我有着老实、量力而行的品质,我不会为了得到您的青睐而强调事实,虚张声势,而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的,究竟校学生会主席只有一个,但具有多地方能力的高中生远不止这些。
做事坚决,善于筹划是我的另一长处。说到筹划,我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算:7岁就能识别数十种车标的我,无疑是一种巨大的激励,我也励志将来要进入一家汽车企业,介入设计制造一部机能优异,而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知,现今中国汽车在发念头的节油耐用,不乱机能上仍有一定的进步空间,而伴跟着油价的提高,增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛,进入乘用领域。在车身结构地方,人们对于安全恬静的追求是无止境的,所以有了碰撞吸能设计,有了更优秀的悬架,有了铝材,甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中,让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想,一旦进入X,就都很有可能变为现实。
此致
敬礼!
申请人:
xx年xx月xx日
Dear:
No one can achieve greatness on her own—this is what I have come to realizeduring my unpredictable routefromundergraduate to professional artist. I am along wayfrommy preconceived path and, not long ago, I saw this deviation as afailure. Now I understand the variances in my course as a discovery of where mytrue brilliance resides, and it has been the people along the way who havehelped me shape this journey. As a graduate graphic design student at [theschool], my expectation is to encounter more individuals who will contribute tomy potential.
My original direction was towards illustration and I built a greatfoundationfrommy undergraduate education, thanks to illustrators xx and xxxand letterpress guru xx. My attraction to piecesfromthe Arts & Crafts andArt Nouveau movements and native cultures began to translate into my art. InItaly, I had the extraordinary opportunity to see the work of illustratorsfromaround the world at the Bologna Children's Book Fair. Six months after receivingmy BFA, I took an intensive weeklong trip to New York City, full ofinformational meetings, portfolio drop-offs, and even an interview with xx. Bytheendof my visit, I was confident that I would soon be living in New York asan illustrator.
Dear sir / madam:
I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXiautonomous region, in 2006. I am still studying in high school now, because Iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream tostudy abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.
First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which I think is more reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar withthe climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parentsmy plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.
As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education,I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.
My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institutefor about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculumson preschool education.
I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished allhigh school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income,so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I willreturn to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my lifevalue.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear Sir:
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
xx大学的各位领导:
您们好!
首先感谢你们能在百忙之中审阅我的个人留学申请书。
我叫———,是来自——某中学的一名高三的理科生,即将面临高考,我期望透过贵校来实现我在——大学学习的梦想。一向以来,——大学对我都有很大的吸引力,有着悠久的历史,深厚的文化底蕴,丰富的教学资源,良好的学术氛围,强烈的时代气息,——大学历经沧桑,饱经风雨,为祖国培养了许多优秀人才,取得了丰硕的科研成果,� 我十分渴望能在20xx年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书,成为贵校的一名学生,成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。
进入高中以来,我不断为实现这一理想而努力学习文化知识,勤学善思。英语、理化是我的强势科目,英语成绩个性优异。我参加了今年的全国中学生英语创新大赛,并有幸进入复赛,虽然由于种。种原因和最后的大奖擦肩而过,但参加竞赛的这种过程使我的潜力得到了很大的提升。
除了学习成绩优秀以外,我还有多方面的特长,我参加了校园的乐队,业余时间我喜欢拉二胡,学习二胡,不仅仅丰富了我的课余生活,而且升华了我对音乐的见解,在二胡的世界中,有奔腾豪放的《赛马》,有坚定有力,追溯光明的《光明行》,也有悲愤哀怨的《江河水》,我用心参与文体活动。初中时博兴县的才艺表演大赛中获得优秀节目奖。
我不仅仅爱好计算机,在业余时间,我参加了教育部组织的计算机等级考试并取得了一级B证,而且经常用心参与体育锻炼,强健体魄,增强毅力。除此之外,我热情、开朗,乐于助人,阳光、向上,所以高中以来,我年年被评为为"三好学生"。
但是,这些成绩只能代表我的过去,梦在心中,路在脚下,站在人生的十字路口,我选取了——大学,我期望——大学能敞开怀抱,给我带给一个大发展的平台,期望各位领导和老师能理解我的申请,衷心的感谢!
此致
敬礼!
申请人:xx
20xx年xx月xx日
尊敬的xxx大学老师:
您好!
我是xxx,现就读于xxxx。感谢您在百忙之中审阅我的留学申请书。
xxxx大学,以怒蹄奔腾的骏马为标志物,希望学子们能“腾天潜渊,吐纳川海;辽阔原野,一任奔驰”,博大高远的追求使我渴慕不已,心神往之。我渴望成为xxx大学的一名学生。
由于在数学上表现出了优秀的能力,我5岁时上了小学。第xxx届全国数学“希望杯”比赛中获得全国三等奖。进入高二之后,我在所有考试(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的周考、区统考)中都保持着班级第一、年级第一的成绩,而且整个高中年级的各科会考成绩都是A。我认为只要对学习有着严肃认真的态度,始终都在努力超越自我,就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性对待考试、不断提高自己的学习能力,从而保持了一个稳定的、向上的状态,我会将这种状态在我以后的学习、生活中继续保持下去。
我出生在一个民主开放的家庭。父母都是老师,给我一定的自由发展空间,并着重培养我的领悟能力、学习能力和动手能力,让我学会自立。于是我在遇到生活、学习、与人沟通相处等方面的困难时,都自己想办法独立解决,从而在各方面成为班级、年级的佼佼者。由于父母对我潜移默化的影响,我做事十分认真,习惯追求完美,虽然十分完美是不可能的,但是追求完美的态度和意志让我在学习、工作中有着出色的表现。
正如校训“xxx”所展示的,我的母校xxx学校,既秉承了传统教育的严谨、求实,也发扬了寄宿学校的军事化管理,更融入了外国教育的开放和高效。正是在这样的环境中,我拥有了丰富的知识、多样的能力、坚强的毅力和开朗的性格。在xxx年的学习生涯中,我更加成熟稳重,做事心思缜密、谋划周到,成为一个学习优秀、善于处理各方面事务、全面发展的人。
此致
敬礼!
申请人:xxx
20xx年xx月xx日
1、制定留学方案
很多学生和家长都认为出国留学的机会难得,在申请出国留学时,根本就没有结合学生的情况制定留学方案。现在家长可以咨询一些专业的留学机构的老师,可以根据学生的学习情况以及语言成绩为学生确定留学的方案,在专业留学人士的指导下,可以制定出更适合学生的留学方案。
2、留学费用测算
为学生制定留学方案之后,可以提前计算出学生的留学费用。学生申请不同的国家需要准备的留学费用根据不同的学校留学费用也存在一定的差异。比如在申请留学时就会涉及到办理签证需要的银行存款证明,家长准备让孩子出国留学就一定要提前做好规划,毕竟有的国家办留学签证时,对于费用问题要求比较严格。
3、准备材料
大家先要做准备,这里首先是对学校和专业的了解,大家需要全方位的搜集资料,进行对比,确定下自己的目标,从而后续的准备才能够不浪费时间。
需要准备的材料主要有学历证、成绩单、推荐信、CV、PS等,申请开放的时间在12月左右,戒指的日期是1月中旬,大家要把握住黄金时间。
4、学校申请
当学生准备好了所有材料之后,就需要开始申请学校。每个学校申请的时间都不一样,学生一定要提前看好各国学校申请时间,尽早提交自己的资料,以免错过了申请时间。如果申请的学校需要学生提交推荐信等材料时,学生一定不要将同一份材料递交到所有的学校,一定要有针对性的写推荐信,这样才可以提高自己录取的。
5、等待结果
审核一般需要两个月左右,当然热门院校会花更长的时间,所以一般结果会在3-5月份的时候进行公示,大家需要时刻关注着学校的官方网站。
而但大家看到了自己的名字之后,就要密切关注自己的邮箱,收到录取确认的邮件之后,如果满意学校,需要及时进行确认,并且回复邮件,
6、办理签证
紧接着就是办签证,大部分的材料都是现成的,大家要做的,主要是去银行办理存款证明,然后去医院接受体检,并且获取体检报告。
大家需要先进行预约,因为这时候是申请的高峰期,约定好时间后可以避免白跑一趟,递交材料之后再缴纳手续费,然后就是回家等待结果了。
7、安排住宿
在等待审核的期间,大家先要安排自己的住宿,可以申请学校提供的宿舍,也可以联系中介,自己租房子,这些要在出国之前就确认好。
然后就是整理出国的行李,订购出行的机票,并且和学校联系接机的时间,拿到签证之后就可以出发啦。
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is xxx,xxx University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students xxx,and believe that it can be a good completionof your masters courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast,xxxx adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, xxx students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that hell be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, andxxx by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school xx football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. xxsaid the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear:
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the application process. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing number of applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is also increasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a college recommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about a candidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for them to see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea to include in the application, even if the college does not require one, many colleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep in mind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that you know the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendation letter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written for candidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harm than good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendation letter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length of time you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of the recommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and his or her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement an application, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the college he or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of a college recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character of the candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letter is to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experience and special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate, the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, before writing a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the person to whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name, the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write a college recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. A letter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave a negative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendation letter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if it can be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application, return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadline of the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequate amount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the most important detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sure to save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation letter easier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may ask that you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is important that each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information can be recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the original passage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a college recommendation.
Dear:
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economicsplays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position.Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannot catch upwith the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field inChina, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered.Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20x, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20x, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20x, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degreein management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence inmanagement, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
Respectful Sir or Madam:
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian,a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy,I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people.But when I went to high school,our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown.
But I still keep my faith,because I know that my family will support me tolet my dream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be anexchange student,I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German tostudy but I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing thisletter to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do betterjust because I have a dream that I can change my family,my hometown even mycountry. I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. Atschool,I‘m a good student. I’m interested about sports,arts and science. Ialso like to study foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German andEnglish at school. I noticed that language can let me communicate with otherseasily. But I can’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanicculture clearly. That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But Ineed your trust. I need a scholarship of your school,because I’m a goodstudent. I have a dream. In that dream,I can see my parents are smiling becauseI became a useful person. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came backfrom German. My will is strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German.So I‘m writing to you to apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return.Thank you for your kind heart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
yours,
Li Ming