四级作文，难度已经有所提高了，但也有人写的很好。
今天，我非常高兴，因为我要去拿证书！
上次，我到电脑上查分的时候，看见我的分数居然是——72！妈妈说我已经通过了，我不信，她说：“只要是过了60分就可以了。”这个理由让我有点半信半疑。
到了拿证书的日子了，爸爸带着我来到了上次拿准考证的地方拿。一到那，我的心就像小兔子，蹦来蹦去。爸爸手拿我的准考证，（领证书要带注考证才行）走到报名处，说：“我来拿证书了。”那口气，非常自豪。别人把我的照片还给了我，然后从她（他）们的办公室里拿出了我的证书。这下我总算相信妈妈说的话了，下楼的时候，爸爸对我说：“如果你这个考过了4级，以后考大学就可以不用考英语了。”回家后妈妈也是这样说的。于是，我暗暗下定了决心：“一定要考完4级！”
One morning I got up very early and everything around was very quiet. Trees,grasses,and sidewalks were still covered with fresh dew. The sun was just rising out of the horizon, emitting streaks of red hue through clouds. I thought that I was an early bird and could enjoy the fresh air of the early morning alone. Taking a walk in the park and breathing fresh air was the idea. Therefure,I began to walk towards the park. However, when I arrived at the park, I fimnd, to my surprise, that there were so many people there. Men and women of all ages were taking exercise in various ways. Some were doing morning exercises,while others were jogging up and down the gravel path around the lake. Young people were playing tennis. Elderly people were playing sword or practising shadow boxing. Deeply moved by what I saw, I joined them. While chatting with them I became aware of the advantages of physical exercises. They are conducive to health, stimulating blood circulation, decelerating aging and prolonging life. Therefore, it is obvious that taking early morning walks makes a man healthy and wise.
There is no exaggeration in saying that when it comes to the choice after graduating from university, people who are standing at the crossroads may have different ideas. Some people may choose to further their study, while others may want to go abroad. Facing the choices of working in a state-owned business and a joint venture, I would like to choose the former one.
The reasons are listed as following. At the top of the list, it is an undeniable factthe state-owned business can provide a stable life for me , so I can spend more time with my parents without worrying about other things. Additionally, we must admit that if I work in a state-owned business, I will work re-laxly and without much pressure.That is what I want. In line with a survey conducted by authorities concerned on the web, nearly two thirds of people interviewed like to make the same choice as me.
In a word, if I can work in a state-owned business, I think, I will have a happy life.
Tomorrow is a new day,we can have a new start.It's a very famous saying.It's also my motto.Every morning when I get up,I always speak this sentence loudly!I think that is very important for everyone.The happy mood can make us have a good condition.
omorrow is a new day,we can have some new experiences in our life.If you have something wrong with your friends or you argue with your parents,you can also throw all of the bad things tomorrow! Because you know tomorrow you will trust everyone involve you.
Tomorrow is a new day,we even can have a new life.If you swung a mace to someone yesterday,you can be very friendly to him,too. Maybe you can gain a new friendship! Isn't that imagine?You can have a very special tomorrow on your power.
Tomorrow is a new day.If you believe yourself ，you could be the stroller of life!
I am a good girl,I think,because i am kind,outgoing,funny,smart and good looking.But I do not have a boyfriend.
And I also had a bachelor degree,good computer skill,good at both spoken and written English,but till now I didn't even got a job.
Can you tell me why why?
what can I do?
what shall I do?
I don't ask for more,I just need a job and a man.when I feel sad,some guy can hog me,that all!
Nowadays, we are witnessing a surge in technology in all aspects. People’s views vary greatly on whether this trend are causing people’s addiction. In my point of view, being immersed in a sea of technology will definitely harm people’s life, even make them become addicted. For one thing, despite the fact that some technologies, are invented to help people, many of them are made to attract people’s attention and make profit. Unaware of this, one would easily get trapped in the world of technology, like computer technology, and lose himself. For another, since most of us are living in a highly digitalized society, few can escape from the influence of their friends and families who are already addicts to technology. All in all, without strict government restriction and proper guidance on computer technology, people are exposed to the risk of being addicted. It is also necessary for everyone to resist this temptation and maintain good self-discipline.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on whether violent video games online will cause students’ violent behaviors. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
20xx年英语四级作文评分标准
作文评分标准
本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表：
档 次 评 分 标 准 3-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 0-12分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。 7-9分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 -3分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 0分
未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。
In recent years，microblog has become part ofour use it to reveal their inner voice，or collect and share thoughts and things they find show that over half a billion people are using it.t.
The benefits that microblog has brought US are example，it enables people to convey their emotions and thoughtS more instantly and conveniently. It thus also provides a chance for people to release their inner it offers a platform for relatives and friends to keep in touch at any time.
However，microblog Can also be potentially dangerous if not properly being addicted to it is nothing but a waste of may also give away people’s privacy or other important ’S worsg，being susceptible to others’ ideas easilypeople may lose the ability of thinking independently.
All in all，microblog provides us comfort and also inevitably some should be careful while using it.
There is an old saying itl China: Practice makes perfect. Practice is a means and perfect is a goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life. Take the study of English for example. Practice enables us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar quickly and practice also makes us hecome fluent in speaking and writing. It is ahnost impossible for a person to speak English fluently and accurately without a lot of practice. Another case in point is cooking. A good cook can prepare a delicious meah But you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practising. Through practice, he then becomes an expert at cooking. It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be good at doing things. Since we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?
1、 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，
2、 出现这种现象的原因是
3、 为了改变这种状况，我认为。
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点评：
此次的作文主题与以往四级考试有所不同。以往主题主要关注学生的生活、就业、社会问题等，而此次作文主题落脚点与学生的学习本身有关。议论英语学习中忽视单词拼写的问题，这样的主题更好地体现出了英语学习目的与英语考试目的的结合，使考生切身体会到英语学习当中词语拼写的重要性。
这样的作文其实对考生本身来说难度并不大，因为考生自己在英语学习的过程中必然会忽视词汇的拼写，加之日常生活中文字的电子处理手段的日益增多，自动纠错功能更是会让考生不经意间就失去了单词拼写的感觉。因此，对于这样的文章，考生可以从自己的切身体会出发，分析自己在日常的学习中有无此类现象以及产生此类现象的原因，进行简单的构思从而把整篇文章整理出来。
此次的作文还是一篇小型的议论文。按照四级作文的格式要求，第一段我们还是总起说明现在在学生中间存在着忽视英语单词拼写的现象，这种现象给学生的写作带来了很大的问题和影响从而引起了学校和老师的担忧。
Recent years, the relationship between doctors and patients has been a heated topic. However, with the increasingly serious physician-patient relationship, it is important to find out some ways to solve the problem. Therefore, some measures mentioned below are the most important aspects that we should take into consideration.
On the one hand, it is indispensable that communication between doctor and patients should be strengthened due to the the fact that doctor-patient communication can be seen as a bridge of two-way communication between doctors and patients, which is beneficial for them to improve their relationship. As a matter of fact, although sometimes there are some defects in medical infrastructure, patients can make allowance for them friendly for their good relationship. On the other hand, the most important character doctor should have is professional ethics that is the foremost way to gain trust from patients.
All in all, it is high time that both hospitals and patients should take some steps to deal with current poor relationship. Only in this way, can we create a harmonious society.
选题意义：
这个题目属于社会类话题，但是与大学生的生活密切相关，应该在预料之中，充满着时代气息。从结构和语言表达上来说，难度不大。本次作文的选题是非常具有现实意义和教育意义的。首先本次选题能与时俱进，20xx年6月1日国家颁布了限塑令，能紧跟时代形势。其次，看上去是一个社会性的话题，其实仔细分析一下，与大学生的生活也是密切相关的，每个大学生都有用一次性塑料袋的`经历，无论是在学校食堂还是在超市，这样就使得大学生有亲身经历，有话可说。
文章结构：
本次题目依然采取了三段式的结构，有描写现象阐释问题说明意义。这个结构并不困难，在辅导班中都对每个段落结构，比如说描写现象、阐述问题、说明意义、发表评论等都进行了逐个讲解，并给出了具体的独家的闪光句型。同时这篇作文与08年6月份的四级作文有类似之处，上一次作文也是三段式：呈现娱乐活动的多种多样娱乐活动的正反分析自己的看法。在描述现象和阐述看法和意义的段落几乎是相同的，这再一次说明了研读真题的重要性，也正是我们点点英语四六级教研团队所一贯倡导的真题至上原则，而且要对真题超精解，提炼出规律性的东西，这对未来参加考试的考生有很强的借鉴意义。
Do you know who my favorite teacher is? Now I tell his name to you, OK?
Our English teacher is my favorite ， He is called xx.He is a good teacher and he is very fun 。He always encourages us to study well ，I remembered that he told us:“You should stand the test of time ， overcome every difficulty and challenge to win 。”He lets the students believe that “Where there is a will ，there is a way（有志者事竟成）。”meaningwhile,he treats each pupil fairly. And he has taught us a lot of knowledge. So we all love him.
Writing is a skill tested in all major standardized educational tests, including CET-4/6, TOEFL, IELTS, and so on. But there has been no shortage of reports from different sources that a large proportion of students, especially college students, have ill-performed writing skills, earning relatively low scores in tests as well as on school assignments.
In my opinion, writing is a crucial skill for students. It is a reliable way by which one impart knowledge, suggest plans, fight for one’s idea, refute a theory, and many other purposes. So if you are good at writing, then you are able to fulfill the tasks above mentioned more effectively. Besides, noted writes, be they novelists, poets or editors-in-chief enlighten every generation of readers with new experiences. That’s why readers today still discuss on and share their opinions on great books such as A Dream in Red Mansions.
In a nutshell, few skills are more important than writing in the current society. So my suggest would be that every one, college students particular, takes time to hone writing skills, get more practice in it, so that we can live up to the social expectation of becoming socialist successors.
In recent years，there have appeared more and more artificial beauties around only those actresses but also many ordinary women are crazy about cosmetic fail to resist the temptation of becoming more beautiful by changing some parts of their bodies within a few hours’ surgery.
What are responsible for the prevalence of cosmetic surgeries？ Firstly，thanks to the development of shaping techniques，the chances of successful surgeries have increased greatly，which makes more people begin to believe and accept cosmetic ， with the improvement of living standard，people have more money to satisfy their nature of pursuing beauty.
From my point of view，cosmetic surgeries have their necessity of existence in modern do help some people build confidence by giving them a beautiful face or figure. However，cosmetic surgeries cannot bring permanent beauty and might be think one’s inner beauty is more suggest that people should think twice before deciding to accept cosmetic surgeries.
As to me,Facing the choices of working in a state-owned business or in a joint venture, I would like to choose to work in a state-owned business 。 There are two reasons for my choice.first,the state-owned business can provide a stable life for me ， so I can spend more time with my parents without worrying about other things. second,if I work in a state-owned business, I will work relaxly and without much pressure.That is what I want.I believe mamy people would make the same choice as me.
In short, I think I will have a happy life if I can work in a state-owned business.
As we widely know that the relationship between parents and children plays a significant role in the domestic relationship, which not only serves as crucial bridge to build trust and connection between two generations but also exerts a profound and subtle influence toward to children’s personal growth.
In order to strengthen the relationship, it is imperative to cultivate the respect between generations, which not only includes the respect to parents from children but also the other way around. Furthermore, it is sensible for the parents to spend more time on the company with their children, enhancing the affection between each other. Finally, it is wise for the parents to set an example rather than make demands, enabling the children to follow and achieve spiritual development.
To sum up, the sound relationship between two generations requires the integration of numerous measures derived from the joint effort of parents, children and schools.
In present society, the rapid development of science and technology has brought a lot of convenience to people’s life. But a host of people show concerns that the convenience of the technology is making people lazier than before. From my point of view, technology does not make people lazy. First of all, every advance in human history is the result of technological development.
And this progress will promote the development of human productivity. Secondly, technology can liberate human beings from tedious manual labor, so as to carry out more meaningful innovation activities. Finally, human beings do benefit from technological progress, but they do not become lazy because society always evolves with time. To sum up, I think we should invest more in science and technology and develop new and more creative industries. At the same time, some exploratory practices are ought to be carried out as well to avoid being lazy.
My father used to talk to me about his five used to say thatIwas unfortun ate that I had Iused to envy him and wonder how nice it would beto have aho useful of brothers and used to wonder what would happen to me if I were to lose my speaking,I do not have to share anything with own all my parents can ask for anything I always wear new clothes and eat the best my parents spend all their money on me,I can study at the best university of t he country.
Lucky asI am,I now and then feel very lonely andI have nobody to complain about my Ilong fora quarrel with my brothers and sisters! Of course I have classmat es and friends, but they are I feel so pessimistic that after myparents leave the world,I will have no blood relatives left to share with me the fond memories of my am likely to become selfish while Irealize the world is for shari
So,I am happy but lonely;Iam fortunate but piteous;Iam loved but spoiled;Iam well-bre d but selfish, because I am the only child of the family.
Online dictionary is becoming increasingly popular. Nowadays, more and more people are studying languages under the help of online dictionary, which has aroused a heated debate over the pros and cons. In my opinion, online dictionaries have both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, online dictionaries bring us great convenience to those who have trouble in learning languages in work and study. Because not only can the dictionaries enable us to figure out some complex words in some literatures or thesis but improve ourselves without the help of teachers. On the other hand, however, its demerits are also evident. Online dictionaries are not like a book that we can take anywhere but an electronic device. Once the device is out of power, it will influence our study. Additionally, viewing the screen for a long time undoubtedly does harm to users’ eyesight.
From what I have illustrated above, we can find that the online dictionaries are more like a double-edged sword. Neither do we discard it nor completely rely on it. Only when we make reasonable use of it can we maximize its benefits tremendously.
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